One day in a hot summer，we couldn't stand the heat，so it seemed like a good idea to go to the beach.My oldest brother，Black，agreed to drive my younger sister，Mary and me to the beach for the day.
We drove with the windows down，and the radio playing.I sat in the front，and the wind saved me from the heat as it blew through my hair.We parked near a beach we had never been to，but it didn't matter because I love the beach-any beach.
As soon as we carried all our things down to the sand，I ran to the water and stood there，letting the waves wash over my feet.Then I dove in and swam while the water rushed over my body.It felt icy cold at first，but it didn't matter because the sun was so hot.
The waves were big and powerful that day.I wasn't the best swimmer and didn't know how to tread water （踩水） because I had taught myself to swim，but I thought I could swim pretty well.Soon Black and Mary joined me，and we had a lot of fun together.When Black got out of water，Mary and I continued to jump into the waves，and slowly we drifted （漂流） further away from the beach.
Suddenly，it got hard to swim back toward the shore.As I began to struggle，I saw Mary's face just above the water.The waves were crashing over her head，and she was shouting when she wasn't swallowing water.I tried to swim quickly to her，knowing that I had to be my fastest or she could die.Finally，I got close enough to grab （抓住） her.I stopped swimming and tried to put my feet down，but I couldn't reach the bottom.That was when I really began to feel fear.
注意：
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
When Mary grabbed onto me with all her life，I began to see that I couldn't support her because I didn't know how to tread water，let alone （更不必說） be a lifeguard.
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When we made it back onto the beach，Mary began coughing up water （咳水）.
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【答案】Paragraph 1：
When Mary grabbed onto me with all her life，I began to see that I couldn't support her because I didn't know how to tread water，let alone be a lifeguard.We were both moving our arms quickly，trying to stay on top.The next thing I knew is that we were underwater and it looked like the end.I resurfaced once more and shouted with fear.Finally，Black heard us.He went running toward the water and swam to us.I felt his hand reach out and grab my body.Then I looked up and saw that he had Mary under his other arm.Luckliy，we were saved!
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When we made it back onto the beach，Mary began coughing up water.My whole body ached，and I felt like I'd just run a long race.Mary and I were both crying，but happy to be safe.I was so thankful to be alive.I looked up to Black as my hero.And I decided something：I signed up for some swimming lessons and learned how to tread water.
When Mary grabbed onto me with all her life，I began to see that I couldn't support her because I didn't know how to tread water，let alone be a lifeguard.We were both moving our arms quickly，trying to stay on top.The next thing I knew is that we were underwater and it looked like the end.I resurfaced once more and shouted with fear.Finally，Black heard us.He went running toward the water and swam to us.I felt his hand reach out and grab my body.Then I looked up and saw that he had Mary under his other arm.Luckliy，we were saved!
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When we made it back onto the beach，Mary began coughing up water.My whole body ached，and I felt like I'd just run a long race.Mary and I were both crying，but happy to be safe.I was so thankful to be alive.I looked up to Black as my hero.And I decided something：I signed up for some swimming lessons and learned how to tread water.
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The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked， "Hey，girl，you want to have the noodles？
"Oh，yes…，but I don't have money on me…" she replied.
"That's nothing.I'll treat you today，" said the man. "Come in."
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles，whose smell was so attractive.
As she was eating，Jenny cried silently.
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"Nothing，actually I was just touched by your kindness!" said Jenny as she wiped her tears. "Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles，while my mother，drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!!"
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Jenny sat there，speechless and numb with shock？she remembered Mother's familiar face and weathered hands. "Why did I not think of that？A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted，but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me."
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