改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷，如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下面要求改正：
    此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\） 劃掉。在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
    此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
    此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
    注意：原行沒有錯誤的不要改。每行最多只能加、減、改動一個詞，縮寫算一個詞。
Two men are in the same room of a hospital.They are serious ill.One （1）

seriously

seriously

man has to lie on his bed all the day.Every day，the man by the window （2）

the

the

tells the other about things outside. "Some children are thrown （3）

throwing

throwing

bread to the ducks on the lake." "The girls are such beautiful in their （4）

so

so

dresses." The other man is happy to hear about all the activity （5）

activities

activities

and colors of the world outside.One day，the man by the window dies. （6）

√

√

The others man asks the nurse to move his bed next to the window. （7）

other

other

Finally he can sit up to see outside，and he is very disappointed （失望） . （8）

but

but

"My roommate told me so much wonderful things about outside!But （9）

many

many

all I can see is a white wall!" he says. "He couldn't see the wall.He
was blind.He just wanted you live with hope." says the nurse. （10）

to live

to live